Deadman Walking

Hey I'm Barb and I'm going to be your critique.
I'm very hard on people
Vision- I'd give you three stars. You obviously put a lot of work into the background but probably not as much into the actual person.
Originality- 3 stars because, let's face it kid. Lots of people are doing face portraits and it's always the same angle. Next time try something different,
T- 3 and a half. Nice shading and detail, though when you're working on his face try a better structure on his jaw line.
I- keep it up. It's nice. There's always room for improvement.